The Giant Wave

One summer holiday I went down to a beach in Whitianga called Hahei beach. My family and I walked on to the hot sand  and saw the beached was packed. On this sunny day  when we finally found a spot and put up the beach umbrella I dropped the rest of the things and ran for the beach.

The waves at Hahei could be very big but I wasn't thinking about that when I ran for the ocean. When I hopped in it was refreshing but then when I turned my back for a second the waves hit me and i went tumbling through the waves.

I started running but the another wave caught my feet and dragged me back and it happened again and I couldn't breath. I opened my mouth to call out to my family but I just got salty water in my mouth and pushed over by another wave.

I decided to run like I was running from wolfs and the wave began to catch up to me "Oh no!" I cried "Not today." I then said and jumped over it so it wouldn't catch me and then I ran back to my family and stayed away from the beach for awhile.

HI! My name is Mia and this is my blog for learning. This post is my personal writing and here is a picture of the rubric I followed.

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